Wednesday, January 20, 2010

Tilt by Lambcullen

Title: Tilt
Author: lambcullen
Link: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5483997/1/Tilt
Summary: MAN WANTED: 52 cards. 52 Positions. Can an internet advertisement really bring two people together? Even if it's only based on sex? AU/AH/OOC Canon Couples.
Rating: M
Readability - 10
Grammar - 10
Humor - 8
Fluffiness/Angst - 6
Fur-friendly (Jake love scale) – 0
Emo-sensitive (Edward love scale) – 10
Smut – 8.5
Is this story complete? No
Did the reviewer finish reading the story? No

*Spoilers follow*

This is a really good fic, especially if you’re a He-man Jacob hater. I was with it for a while, even when she said that Bella couldn’t stop laughing when she tried to have sex with Jake (I have no idea how that’s even possible, but I rolled with it). Then I read the latest update (chapter 9) and about had a meltdown. Apparently, Jake hit Bella when she refused to give him head. I had to stop after that. I couldn’t even finish the chapter. Edward and Bella are really sweet and awkward together, but I just can’t deal with the ‘evil Jake’ factor. If it gets better later, someone let me know and I’ll update this post. As it stands, my warning to my fellow Jakie lovers is proceed with caution…if at all.

Sidenote: Kell tells me that some of the other stories by this author aren’t so friendly to Jake either, so definitely be prepared if you are reading anything from this author.

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