Stay by crimsonmarie

Title: Stay

Author: crimsonmarie

Link: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4756566/1/Stay
Summary: As an actor, Edward Cullen is surrounded by people that he couldn't really care less about. What happens when he buys a house in the middle of nowhere and meets his new neighbors? AH, AU, ExB, rated M for future chapters and language.
Rating: M
Readability - 10
Grammar - 10
Humor - 7
Fluffiness/Angst - 3
Fur-friendly (Jake love scale) – 3
Emo-sensitive (Edward love scale) – 10
Smut – 5

Is this story complete? Yes

Did the reviewer finish reading the story? Yes

*Spoilers follow*

This story is actually really cute, but one reason why I thought I could help-out Cora with this blog. Initially, Jake is innocuous. He and Bella are in a relationship, and Edward, although he's attractive and present, there is no move made for them to get together. It's when Jake gets paranoid and possessive (literally--when he moves out he takes almost all of their furniture with him, including their bed, and the food in the refrigerator) that the shit hits the fan and the Jake-o-meter plummets. Later on in the story he gets back together with an old girlfriend and makes an attempt to flaunt their relationship to provide humor for the plot when it backfires. Overall, good story, but one that I would recommend Cora to avoid, as well as any Jake-lovers out there.