Seventh Inning Stretch by Live720

Title: Seventh Inning Stretch

Author: Live720

Link: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5335706/1/Seventh_Inning_Stretch

Summary: What happens when an engaged Bella meets up with her drunken one-night stand at a baseball game, after she thought she’d never see him again? Will she be able to put the past behind her or will she be lured back into her lust for the sexy Jacob Black? Sample entry for the SOB challenge, AH, OOC, Rated M for Lemony goodness.

Rating: M

Readability - 10
Grammar - 10
Humor - 4
Fluffiness/Angst - 7
Fur-friendly (Jake love scale) – 10
Emo-sensitive (Edward love scale) – 10
Smut – 9
Is this story complete? No
Did the reviewer finish reading the story? Up to the latest update (Chapter 6 at the time of review)

*Spoilers follow*

Soooooo... I'm hooked on this story. The summary pretty much explains what's happening here. The sex with Jake (especially at the stadium) is ridiculously hot. You end up feeling bad for both of the boys. She has amazing sex with Jake, but keeps telling herself how she's not in love with him (stab me in the heart, why don't you). She cheats on Edward, her fiancee in this story, and even though she's sure she loves him, she can't bring herself to be with him physically after being with Jake.

It's heartfail all around, but a definite must read :D