Thursday, January 21, 2010

Pen Pals by covermeinfeathers

Title: Pen Pals

Author: covermeinfeathers

Link: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5045745/1/Pen_Pals

Summary:
Bella and Edward met 12 years ago and were faithful pen pals for 4 years, when they met again. After the second meeting, Edward abruptly stopped writing. Now Bella's come to work for Edward's company. Will she recognize him and forgive him?

Rating: M

Readability/Grammar - 9 (just a few confusing parts I had to re-read)
Humor - 10
Fluffiness/Angst - 1
Fur-friendly (Jake love scale) – 10
Emo-sensitive (Edward love scale) – 10
Smut – 9

Is this story complete? Yes

Did the reviewer finish reading the story? Yes

No need for spoilers here. This is a feel-good fic, and I thoroughly enjoyed it. It's not all butterflies and rainbows the entire time, but issues are resolved quickly, and any left over angst of the characters are put to rest by the other POV as quickly as possible.

Writing is very concise. Plot is clear, and moves efficiently.

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