Holding Out For You by ObsessingOverEdward

Title: Holding Out For You

Author: ObsessingOverEdward

Link: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4666438/1/Holding_Out_For_You

Summary: After her divorce, Bella starts a new life with her son. She soon meets a handsome doctor, who is dealing with his own loss and is struggling to raise his two kids. It's a story of finding strength during adversity and learning to love again

Rating: M

Readability - 10
Grammar - 10
Humor - 5
Fluffiness/Angst - 3
Fur-friendly (Jake love scale) – 1
Emo-sensitive (Edward love scale) – 10
Smut – 5

Is this story complete? Yes

Did the reviewer finish reading the story? Yes

*Spoilers follow*

I enjoyed this story, personally, but it was also another reason I agreed to help Cora with this blog. Jake doesn't do many reprehensible things in this story, and he loves his son, he's just an overall douchebag. He doesn't really want to take life seriously, he cheats on Bella (the reason she divorced him), and then lets the girl move into their house after Bella moves away with their son. Later on in the story, he explains how he'd kick out his girlfriend, if Bella agreed to move back in with him. Yeah. Jake lovers, avoid like the plague.