Thursday, January 21, 2010

Coming to Terms by GinnyW 31

Title: Coming to Terms

Author: GinnyW 31

Link: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4626503/1/Coming_to_Terms

Summary:
A one night stand, a handful of condom wrappers, and Bella decides she's meant to be alone. Fate has other plans. All human. Canon pairings.

Rating: M

Readability/Grammar - 10
Humor - 2
Fluffiness/Angst - 9
Fur-friendly (Jake love scale) – 6
Emo-sensitive (Edward love scale) – 2, 10
Smut – 4

Is this story complete? Yes

Did the reviewer finish reading the story? Yes

*Spoilers follow*

Edward and Bella meet, have a one-night stand. Edward ends up writing his phone number on a condom wrapper (not too bright, Dude), and so Bella gets the wrong impression and throws it away.
Bella becomes pregnant, but can't find Edward to tell him. She randomly sees him at a social event, and informs him that he's pregnant, and he totally flips out. It's definitely an emotional roller coaster to get from here to HEA, but the author does it.

Jake isn't a jerk at all in this fic, he's just kind of clueless. He and Bella dated at one point, but Bella's idea of staying in Forks and living a mundane life--which is what she believes will inevitably follow if she stayed with him--is unacceptable for her. Her relationship with Charlie is not helped when she stops wanting to talk to him all together because he always mentions Jacob. Throughout the story Jacob simply becomes a nuisance that Bella has to deal with, although he does give her good advice, and she genuinely appreciates it, despite his annoying persistence (like I said--he's not a horrible guy, he still wants her, even when she's pregnant with someone else's child).

1 comment:

  1. Another one of my all time favorites! I love this story. *sigh*

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