Disappear Here by h32mh32m

Title: Disappear Here

Author: h32mh32m

Link: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5558114/1/

Summary: Swimming with the sharks is just part of the high school experience, but navigating the social relationships at an elite prep school, Bella finds that getting on Rosalie's bad side is like adding chum to the water. AH OOC ExB eventually, M for sex, drugs.

Rating: M

Readability - 10
Grammar - 10
Humor - 9
Fluffiness/Angst - 6
Fur-friendly (Jake love scale) – n/a updated: 1 as of chapter 23
Emo-sensitive (Edward love scale) – 8
Smut – 7

Is this story complete? No

Did the reviewer finish reading the story? Up to the latest update (Chapter 14 at the time of review)

*Spoilers follow*
Disappear Here is another story that caught me by surprise in the first chapter and has had me hooked ever since. Bella gets dumped, painfully, but not by whom you’re thinking hehe, and tries to mend her broken heart while also defending herself from the evil heifers at her school.

Jake’s not in this story, as of yet. Edward is okay. He has moments where you can see that he cares for Bella, but so far, he mostly just broods. Jasper is the salve for Bella’s broken heart at the moment and I love him. He’s a sweetie! Alice is in this fic too as Bella’s best bud, but they don’t attend the same school. Can’t wait to see how that plays out.

Emmett is hilarious and makes my day pretty much every time he speaks.

This fic has a Cruel Intentions vibe. The kids are rich and jaded, but each character has redeeming qualities. They drink and do drugs, which makes me a little sad, but otherwise, I love this fic long time.

Update: Team Jake fans, be prepared. Though Jake isn't a main character in the story he is mentioned in chapter 23 and it isn't exactly pleasant.