Tuesday, April 13, 2010

The Cocky and the Cougar by ikss

Title: The Cocky and the Cougar

Author: ikss

Link: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5438095/1/The_Cocky_and_The_Cougar

Summary: Credit and Sales - often at war in Corporate America. When Con-Vert's new, young Director of Sales Edward Masen met 38 year-old Director of Credit Bella Swan, it was almost inevitible that sparks would fly. AH...RATED MA - ADULTS ONLY, PLEASE

Rating: M

Readability – 9 (just a little wordy sometimes)
Grammar - 10
Humor - 7
Fluffiness/Angst - 5
Fur-friendly (Jake love scale) – 2
Emo-sensitive (Edward love scale) – 8
Smut – 7

Is this story complete? No

Did the reviewer finish reading the story? Yes (Up to chapter 23)

*spoilers follow*

Jacob fans… *sigh*… as of this second, I have a gut feeling that “2” rating will drop down to a one, or even zero. He’s an attractive American Literature professor and Bella met him as a graduate student (he’s ten years her senior). They separated three years ago when she found him with one of his current grad students, and they are now in the middle of divorcing because said grad student is now pregnant. We don’t know if he’s cheated on her before then, but it’s possible. It’s entirely from Bella’s perspective, so we only know what she knows. I’m pretty sure the reason they weren’t divorced already was because they just didn’t want to hassle with the paperwork (silly, I know).

On that note, I didn’t think I’d enjoy this fic, but it’s actually really good. Bella’s a little too emotionally wishy-washy for me, especially in later chapters, but I’m hoping all ends well. The plot’s fairly obvious, so I’ll just let you get to it. ;)

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