Saturday, March 13, 2010

The Perfect Wife by rmcrms5

Title: The Perfect Wife

Author: rmcrms5

Link: http://www.twcslibrary.com/viewstory.php?sid=19&warning=3

Summary: After Renee and Phil die in a car accident on Bella’s 17th birthday. She is sent to live with her father, Charlie and brother, James in Forks WA after being separated for 10 years with no contact. Charlie dabbles in training and placement of the “perfect” wife for exclusive clientele. Bella quickly learns that she’s going that she’s going to get more than a high school education. She's going to be educated with a purpose.

Rating: NC-17

Readability - 10
Grammar - 10
Humor - 4
Fluffiness/Angst - 10!
Fur-friendly (Jake love scale) – n/a
Emo-sensitive (Edward love scale) – 2, then 10
Smut – 7 (but most of it will make you shudder and at one point I felt ill)

Is this story complete? No

Did the reviewer finish reading the story? Up to the latest update (Chapter 49 at the time of review)

*Spoilers follow*

Guys, take this warning to heart. It isn’t just an idle message. This story contains some seriously fucked up shit including incest and anal rape. If you don’t think you can handle it DO NOT READ THE STORY!

Jake lovers, Jacob makes an appearance or two in this story, but it’s sparing so far, which is why I gave him an n/a on his rating scale. If he becomes a more predominate player in the story, I will update his rating.

Okay, Edward is a fucking bastard for a while. And that’s not my Team Jacob-ness talking, that’s the truth. Here’s the even bigger issue. It’s Carlisle and Charlie’s faults. If you have any love for Charlie or Carlisle DO NOT READ THIS STORY!

1) Charlie is pedophilic incestuous son of a bitch (and that’s me being gentle)

2) Carlisle…I wanna shank him. Like seriously, if he was a real guy, he would be bleeding right now. My blood pressure skyrockets just thinking of the shit he’s done.

James is also a series of expletives, but I figure that was to be expected. If you’re squeamish, I suggest reading the prologue then skipping the first ten chapters. No lie, this story is on the fucked up side. At first, I was reading just because I had to see how the hell Bella was going to get out of a completely fucked situation, but once Edward turns the corner, it gets better.

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