Monday, February 22, 2010

An Introduction to Swirl and Daisy by m81170

Title: An Introduction to Swirl and Daisy

Author: m81170

Link: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5642262/1/

Summary: A first kiss, a first dance, a first curse word shared between best friends. This is the tale of a boring young geek and the social pariah who thought the world of him. A tale of growing up. A tale of a Non-Romantic Romance.

Rating: T

Readability - 10
Grammar - 10
Humor - 9
Fluffiness/Angst - 2
Fur-friendly (Jake love scale) – n/a
Emo-sensitive (Edward love scale) – 10
Smut – n/a

Is this story complete? No

Did the reviewer finish reading the story? Up to latest update (Chapter 11 at time of review)

*Spoilers follow*

The story starts off on Bella's first day of school in Forks. She's in the 8th grade and meets Edward in her first period class. It just gets more and more adorable from there. There's no Jakie so far, so there's no need to worry about him becoming the bad guy. This story is just fluffy, hilarious goodness and I can't wait for the next update!

Sidenote: I wanna pinch Edward's cheeks and take him to Comic Con. He's sooooo cute! (Don't judge me, he hasn't fucked up yet and he is cute)

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