Title: Girl Afraid
Author: agoraphobiantic
Link: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5234244/1/Girl_Afraid
Summary: Edward moves to Forks with his father during his senior year, where he meets Bella Swan. Gorgeous, confident, and non-malicious hater extraordinaire. She hates Edward, and it's anyone's guess why.
Rating: M
Readability - 10
Grammar - 10
Humor - 4
Fluffiness/Angst - 10
Fur-friendly (Jake love scale) – 2, then 3
Emo-sensitive (Edward love scale) – 10
Smut – 7
Is this story complete? Yes
Did the reviewer finish reading the story? Yes
*Spoilers follow*
This story starts out pretty tame. Edward rolls into Forks and Bella hates him the first day. Then the shit starts to hit the fan. Jakie isn't too much of a major player here, but what is seen of him is not awesome. Bella explains some of his behavior later, but still...
Bella...I honestly thought Bella was insane. Then I got to the final few chapters and I just wanted to cry for everyone. Every character with a direct connection to Bella needed a hug (except for Renee and Phil. Be prepared to hate them).
Saturday, February 20, 2010
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