Friday, March 26, 2010

First Edition by lambcullen

Title: First Edition

Author: lambcullen

Link: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5541047/1/First_Edition

Summary: He watched her for weeks and wanted her for just as long. Can one lonely day in his bookstore bring them together.

Rating: M

Readability/Grammar – 10
Humor – 6
Fluffiness/Angst – 5
Fur-friendly (Jake love scale) – 10 (Jake is gay)
Emo-sensitive (Edward love scale) – 10
Smut – 7

Is this story complete? No

Did the reviewer finish reading the story? Yes, to last update (chapter 9 at time of review)

*SPOILERS FOLLOW*

Jake lovers… put this one down. He’s gay.

Okay, so the story is basically two emotionally-inept people who end up having sex in his bookstore. They’ve been eyeing each other for months, but after doing the deed, feel that it’s something more than just a random screw.

A little bit of angst, but mostly fluffy. lambcullen is a HEA gal, so I have complete faith in her stories, although Cora would rather boycott her because she makes Jake into some horrendous incarnations. Whoops! Hi, Cora. How’ve you been? I know we haven’t talked in a while, but I basically read all of lambcullen’s stories. Hehehe…

Wolves addition:
Cora here...Actually, I read all but the latest chapter of First Edition. It's an ok story, I just don't understand why she refuses to let girls lust after the wolves. Jake's a beater in one story, Seth's gay in another... I mean, I lust after gay men sometimes, but knowing they couldn't possibly reciprocate 'cause they aren't into vag takes some of the fun out of it. Just sayin'.

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