The Submissive by tara sue me

Title: The Submissive

Author: tara sue me

Link: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4764216/1/The_Submissive

Summary: Can Bella Swan warm and win the heart of dom, Edward Cullen, while living out her darkest fantasy?

Rating: M

Readability/Grammar – 10
Humor – 2
Fluffiness/Angst – 10
Fur-friendly (Jake love scale) – n/a (Jake is Edward’s lovable dog)
Emo-sensitive (Edward love scale) – 6, 7
Smut – 10

Is this story complete? Yes

Did the reviewer finish reading the story? Yes

*SPOILERS FOLLOW*

The primary reason I gave the Edward love scale not too much of an increase is that the entire time up until the climax (no pun intended), Bella has no idea what is actually going on with Edward, and therefore gives him way too much credit, in my opinion. Then by the time the end rolls around, it’s time to say “Awww…” for the couple in question.

There’s really not much to say about this fic that’s not very obvious to anyone who’s aware of the S&M lifestyle. For what it was, I enjoyed it, and it’s easy to put yourself into Bella’s situation even without personally being an D/S.

Jake lovers: Yes, Jake is Edward’s dog, although there’s nothing derogatory about his character aside from that fact.