Tuesday, March 30, 2010

Hide and Drink by Savage

Title: Hide and Drink

Author: Savage

Link: http://twilighted.net/viewstory.php?sid=9649&textsize=0&chapter=1

Summary: Bella’s blood was just too tempting to be ignored. In this version of Twilight, Edward takes Bella on a sadistic journey with his monstrous side. While Edward drags her around the world, barely keeping a step ahead of his frantic family, Bella battles the monster for possession of the gentler vampire inside her captor. EPOV.

Rating: NC-17

Readability - 10
Grammar - 10
Humor - 4
Fluffiness/Angst - 9
Fur-friendly (Jake love scale) – n/a
Emo-sensitive (Edward love scale) – 2, then 8
Smut – n/a
Sensuality - 8

Is this story complete? No

Did the reviewer finish reading the story? Up to the latest update (Chapter 16 at the time of review)

*Spoilers follow*

This is a reimagining of Twilight, in which a very good question is posed. “What would have happened if Edward didn’t have so much willpower?”
Well, it’s elementary, my dear Twi-fic reader. Edward would have kidnapped Bella after the first day of school and drank her blood every few days.
It’s like one of those train wrecks that are really tragic, but you can’t help but keep your eyes glued to the carnage.
I like this Bella a little more than cannon. She seems a bit stronger, though this is a much tougher situation. There’s no getting out of it. If she tries to leave (which is impossible anyway with a kidnapper who doesn’t sleep and rarely leaves you alone), then Edward goes bat-shit crazy.
Be warned, Edward-Lovers. He does some fucked up things to keep Bella around. He’s getting better, but he’s still a little nutty, which is why he gets an 8 for now instead of a 10.

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