Sunday, March 28, 2010

Hot Landing Zone by hjb2006

Title: Hot Landing Zone

Author: hjb2006

Link: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4676283/1/Hot_Landing_Zone

Summary: Edward Cullen blames scientist Isabella Swan for getting them stranded on a remote island. But hell, Edward can improvise, adapt, and overcome...as long as Bella stops driving him wild...

Rating: M

Readability - 10
Grammar - 10
Humor - 7
Fluffiness/Angst - 4
Fur-friendly (Jake love scale) – n/a
Emo-sensitive (Edward love scale) – 10
Smut – 8

Is this story complete? Yes

Did the reviewer finish reading the story? Yes

*Spoilers follow*

For the majority of this story, Bella and Edward are alone on an island together so there really isn't time for anyone else to be involved. It's a short, sweet, and to the point story about a Marine and a scientist discovering that they have a lot more in common than they thought.
Well-written and a great read.

P.S. Edward as a Marine is def someting I can get behind.

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