Saturday, October 9, 2010

Edward Wallbanger by Feathersmmmm

Title: Edward Wallbanger

Author: feathersmmmm

Link: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5072648/1/Edward_Wallbanger

Summary: Bella moves into a fantastic apartment building in San Francisco. Guess who lives next door? With walls this thin, the tension is gonna be thick...

Rating: M

Readability - 10
Grammar - 10
Humor - 10
Fluffiness/Angst - 1
Fur-friendly (Jake love scale) – 10
Emo-sensitive (Edward love scale) – 2, then 10
Smut – 7

Is this story complete? No

Did the reviewer finish reading the story? Up to the latest update (chapter 21 at time of review)

*Spoilers follow*

In this story, Edward has three women that he has sex with (not at the same time, but I’m sure he’s probably done that at some point). The problem is that he and his lady friends are so loud when they get busy that poor Bella and her cat, Clive, can’t sleep.

The first three or four chapters of the Bang Bang (as I sometimes call this story in my head) are probably some of the funniest I’ve ever read in Twilight fanficdom…maybe ever. The story is told mainly from Bella’s POV and I laughed hysterically when she described the sounds coming through her wall.

After those first few chapters, it’s still funny but as the harem dwindles and the romance heightens, I find that I’m not giggling as much as I used to, which sucks, but it’s still high on the list of my favorite ExB stories (yes, I have a list. Sue me.)

Something to note: Feathersmmmm twists some of the character relationships that we as readers are expecting. I don’t want to give too much away because I, personally, found that the surprise in how the characters were connected was part of what held my interest in the story, but for my Jake lovers, just know that he’s taken and Leah is nowhere in that picture.

P.S. My favorite character is Clive…and I’m not even a cat person.

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