Title: Help Wanted
Author: Jaxon22
Link: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4966784/1/Help_Wanted
Summary: Bella Swan applies for the job of PA to the rude, arrogant and distant Hollywood star Edward Cullen. Will she be able to do her job without letting feelings get in the way? A/H Lush Lemons Graphic and language.
Rating: M
Readability - 10
Grammar - 10
Humor - 6
Fluffiness/Angst - 3
Fur-friendly (Jake love scale) – 10
Emo-sensitive (Edward love scale) – 2, then 10
Smut – 7
Is this story complete? Yes
Did the reviewer finish reading the story? Yes
*Spoilers follow*
So… I didn’t love this story, but I didn’t hate it either. My main problem was that there was sex every chapter and there are like 60 chapters so after a while I just started skipping over the sex to get back to the story. The story itself was ok.
Jake was in it, his presence was minimal (boo) but he wasn’t an asshole (YAY!), hence the rating of 10.
At first, Edward is predictably a douche, but once he warms up he’s almost saccharin sweet.
There are a few hilarious moments and a few angsty moments, but it’s mainly sugary sweet sexy times. If you need an escape into Edward and Bella LaLa land, this is the fic to read.
Friday, October 8, 2010
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