No Choice by glasscannon.lj

Title: No Choice

Author: glasscannon.lj

Link: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5079674/1/No_Choice

Summary: New Moon AU. During Bella's run in with Laurent, what if the wolves had shown up just a few minutes later? Those minutes change Bella's life forever, and she must learn to deal with the consequences. Nominated for two Twific Indie Awards.

Rating: T

Readability - 10
Grammar - 10
Humor - 4
Fluffiness/Angst - 9
Fur-friendly (Jake love scale) – 10
Emo-sensitive (Edward love scale) – 9
Smut – n/a
Sensuality – n/a

Is this story complete? No

Did the reviewer finish reading the story? Up to the latest update (Chapter 14 at the time of review)

*Spoilers follow*

Okay, so I wish this is how New Moon had turned out. It’s WAAAAAY more interesting. Bella actually gets bitten by Laurent and gets away before the wolves come back for her. She turns and then has to figure out what her eternal life will look like since she can’t go back to Charlie.

The characters seem pretty much cannon, though I was disappointed with Bella and the Cullens from time to time in the manner they treated Jacob, who did nothing wrong. That’s vamps for you, I guess.

Jake is a 10 because he’s still pretty awesome and even offers to run away with Bella after she’s turned. He still loves her, despite the fact that she’s undead, and hates Edward, but who would blame him?

Edward is a 9 only because he just showed up in the last chapter and has lost his mind. For real. Bella came to him to bring him back to his family and he calls her a demon. It’s crazy, but I’m sure he’ll make it to the 10 spot quickly.